This week is our final presentation of our animation, bread project, everything connect and portfolio.
I came at 8:30am to set up my things before the presentation which starts at 9am.
Here are some of the photos I took of my projects:
During my presentation, I stutter quite a lot it could be just because I am nervous but overall I think my presentation is fine. So, here is some feedback given by the lecturer.
Bread Project
He said that overall the game play and rules is well thought out. However, he felt that I should explore with more material. For example, the money instead of it being cards I could use paper instead. The same goes with the packaging, if there is different materials I could explore more on the packaging.
Everything connect
He did not really talk about the content, but he felt that the finishing could be further improved. Besides, he say pay attention to the details such as the alignment because my everything connect is made to mimic a website so I need to pay attention to its alignment.
Portfolio
He said that overall he can see my connection from my concept to the artworks and manifesto. However, he say that the font choice could be improved.
Overall
He say that my illustration skills throughout my projects is good. However, just pay more attention on the finishing.
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